Synopsis... I Think

Synopsis

So I've tried to write a synopsis for the series way back before I finished the first one and I'm gonna say it's bad and confusing but this is what I came up with for Raven's Fall.

Raven's Fall
When Alana Lee, a spy hiding from a dark past is framed for treason by her own agency what follows is a whirl wind storm of lies, deception and determination. Now having fallen further than any have in the past, her mission is clear, prove her innocence. what she doesn't count on during her mission is finding love, making friends, building a family, and most of shocking of all her dark past coming back to haunt her. With the help of Vincent Cole, the man who brought her back from the dead and long lost friends Logan Vice and Meko Winters, Alana will do anything to prove her innocence, even if it ultimately costs her life.

So that's the synopsis of the first series before it became a series. I was more than sure it would be just one book but oh no, no I had to go and write write write and here we are.

So now I've had to revise the synopsis to include three more so here they are... I think.

Raven's Fall: The Hunt Begins.
What started as a routine mission to Russia to capture one of the worlds most wanted arms dealers ends with Alana Lee being accused of treason by her agency and country. Having fallen further than any others before her she finds herself up against forces determined to bring her down no matter what. Faced with lies, deception and betray at every corner she has enough to deal with let alone the fact she just over heard an assassin confirming a hit on someone. After realising being a spy is part of who she is she turns to the man that brought her back from the dead Vincent Cole for help. Together their mission is clear, prove Alana innocent and maybe if they got time, stop an assassin, save some lives, find the bad guys and have a few beers.

Raven's Fall: Chasing The Ghost
Alana and Vincent have just one day to save the country's next President and with the people after Alana closing in and her past back to haunt her they are determined to stay ahead of the game even if that means going right into the heart of a city crawling with spies federals agents and cops just waiting to bring her in. Their mission is clear, stop the assassin and if they got the time prove Alana innocent, mess with the people hunting them and lets not forget the beers.

Raven's Fall: The Missing Link
Vincent has discovered Alana's true identity and he can't believe it, any of it and on top of that Alana is missing with the help of a previously dead spy that worked with Alana and her two child hood best friends that thought she was dead the mission is clear, Find Alana and if they got the time save some more lives, find more bad guys and have more beer.

Raven's Fall: It's only Just Begun
The team sent to bring Alana in have finally realised the truth, she was set up and they were all used to do it, now it's their turn, the leader Laken Steele turns to the most unlikely person for help Alana herself. With the real leak in their agency now plugged and management still not paying attention their mission is clear, find the puppet master and if they got time become a team, learn some more truths and of course beer.

So that's what I came up with, it was harder than you think because I had to break it up into what happened in those specific pages and not the whole series, but I think I managed to keep you guessing and add some uh... humour (or not) to it.

Leave your comments on how I should improve it.


PS. I am aware my grammar is atrocious and deserves to be killed with fire thanks for pointing that out.